Brutus Begins is a project by psych-folk artist Ricardo Temporao. The Hamilton based musician resamples and processes elements of nature, acoustic instruments and synthesizers to create a sonic landscape that blurs the lines between the real and the reconstructed. The songwriting and storytelling remain the heart of a world that mirrors our own - commenting on our vices, ambitions and ultimately our evolution. Brutus Begins released "Uncanny Valley" to critical praise. It's been described as "...a juggernaut of a debut", "phenomenal", "as addicting and inviting as a soma hit" and "...one of the most compelling and high quality debuts we've heard in a decade". Currently Ricardo and his team are in production for his next release.
This is another good one. Nice stretching of your style. And you're right about the MGMT-ness of your production. Keep hammering away at getting on those playlists. Have you got yourself a radio plugger yet? What about a manager? Or a publicist. It's probably time to think about those sorts of things. In fact, if you're looking for a publicist, I have someone I can recommend. Just hit me up at email@example.com and I'll connect you. Meanwhile, keep dribbling out product on a regular basis for your fanbase. Remember, too, that you need to play the long game. It's gotta be about the music first before any money can come along. I'll spread this around through my usual outlets.
Hey Brutus - I really liked this from the very start with the bass line / it kinda hooked me from the start in a Stone Roses kind of way. I also liked the vocal delivery and the whole vibe of the song. I thought maybe the chorus could be bigger, more anthemic...felt it was going to explode there more in a bigger way. Maybe bigger gang vocals or something like that I was hearing? Lyrics are really great and have a cool vibe and poetry to them! Overall I think this is really good but not sure if it's quite in my lane for my channels - but feel you're on the right track. I also liked the change up in vocals / female vocals for that hook - good idea. I think everything what you're doing here is great - now it's just about leveling it all up. Nice work!
I like this tune a lot!!! Few basics in terms of getting this to Music Supervisors - you guys need to come up more easily on BMI or ASCAP than you do now... I can't find you easily because they're tricky search engines. Honey & Smoke turns up someone named "David Paul Ellis" on BMI... but I can't confirm that's you because this title isn't listed. It should be, even though it isn't released. Anything you can do to increase your visibility so you pop out on ASCAP / BMI is crucial - so make sure that any & all .mp3s that go out in the world have .mp3s embedded in them. It has to be INCREDIBLY easy to find you to license the track. The song itself - I dig it! Production-wise I would say that it stays a little flat throughout - there's no major swell or big dynamic shift/change type moment, but as a creative choice I can get behind that. Would be curious to hear more of your catalogue... Lyrical themes are solid for sync - they aren't distracting or too specific. The LDR/Portishead in the Old West is a good elevator pitch - and this lines up with that really well. I'd definitely make sure to keep instrumental versions on hand, and also versions with the lyricless vox mixed in.
Love the song, wish I had the lyrics with it, as it's hard to hear them straight off. Also, I think you've spelt the name 'extinction' wrong? Overall, a super lovely tune, catchy even though I can't really hear what you're saying 😅. Happy to share, and mainly just congrats on a beautiful tune! Got a kind late-beatles feel. All the best
Thanks for sending this to me! The record is a rich mix of dream-like reflections and self-aware folk pop. It’s great to hear light and shade being navigated with such ease and such skill. Fans of other contemporary storytellers like Courtney Barnett and Burkini Beach may find something to enjoy! In terms of radio coverage over here in the UK, if you’re aiming for a suitable station like BBC 6Music or BBC Radio 2 as an international artist (am I right in thinking you’re based in Canada?), then it might be worth investing in a UK-based radio plugger, specially if you have a bit of budget. I can always recommend a few names if you need. I can also recommend the station Amazing Radio (where I present a weekly show) - you can upload your tracks to amazingradio.com, or amazingradio.us, for presenters on both sides of the Atlantic to consider for their shows.
"Extinction On My Mind (S.O.S.)" shows a suave, convincing sound that builds enjoyably from lush beginnings -- reminiscent of Luke Haines, enjoyably -- to a funk-tinged, shimmering hook past around the 40-second mark turn. The punctuating "got extinction on my mind," line is poignant and delivered effectively, anticipated each time and being a nice summation of the track's lyrical successes. The uptick in vocal emotion around 02:10 also plays nicely. Thanks for sending this one! I added to my best-of monthly playlists on Soundcloud and Spotify. Since you noted seeking promotion opportunities, feel free to email me at firstname.lastname@example.org to inquire about my PR services -- I'm happy to share rates, success stories, etc. Thanks again! -Mike
Hi! You clearly know your stuff. The production and overall sound is nice! The drums, the bass and vocals works great together. There's also lots of small details instrumental wise for the listener to digest, which I like. The bridge is also a highlight. However I'm missing something melody wise to keep me interested. Other than that - keep doing your thing! Best wishes Soren
Another good one. Keep building that portfolio and keep feeding fans material on a regular basis. A thought: How about posting something on TikTok in the hope that someone picks it up and it goes viral. I'll share this, too.
Thanks for the submission and Happy New Year! I enjoyed it a lot. The song has a really cool vibe. Lyrically I thought the verses could be a little stronger. But the Chorus works. Very catchy and memorable. From a production perspective, the vocal could have some variation between chorus and verse. Or even adding a gang vocal in the chorus to give it more of a lift. Cause in a way the energy stays fairly flat between them. Which can be a good thing depending on its ultimate use. For a record, the listener would likely want to hear that lift. I think a good target for this would be advertising. My company primarily works in Film/TV but we do get some ad requests from time to time. I'll keep this song in mind if the right opportunity comes along. All the best!
Hey Brutus Begins. Really nice video and well done. I dig the production here and really nice production...reminds me of something like The Chemical Brothers x Jesus Jones x INXS. I'm intrigued. I'm not sure if this song in particular gets me all the way to the finish line but I think it's circling the hit zone. I'm definitely going to check out more of your releases i.e. "Stuntman" etc. Great work, in my opinion! I think you're right that these songs are in the lane for synchs. Have you checked out Music Bed and Marmoset Music - I would put your songs up there if I were you. Hope it's helpful! p.s. for synchs - #1 tip. Keep the songs uptempo - and tempo driven - that's what synchs.
KILLER OPENING You definitely get into the vocals quickly, and then the shakers hit the spot fast, my dude. I'm sitting here the chorus sticks the landing... and.... and.... and... it's different! I like it and not what it was expecting. This is the first tune in a while where I've wanted to check out the lyrics - which is a great look overall. The "Alright" is a good hook. I think you might wanna consider a way to amp it up a bit (you're sort of doing that) each time you bring it back around. In terms of making this a "Sync-friendly" song - you have _almost_ all the pieces here. Gritty & swaggy opening, catchy hook - but you're missing a tiny bit of warmth. You have an organ style sound come in somewhere, and I'd consider doing an edit where you have that amp up and build along with the rest of the track. Have alternate mixes of songs like this is ALWAYS a good idea - and one that's a little less angular in the construction (just think "how can this be a little poppier with thei pieces I have here?") could be a good exercise. All that said, as it exists now - there is definitely a chance that it could hit & catch on. But if you're able to have a few different mixes to present, it could open up some new opportunities for it. The only straight up criticism is that the vocals are pretty flat. Not tonally, they just don't vary much from how they come in throughout the rest of the track. It sounds like you have some harmony in the background - so even bringing those levels up could address that. Just some thoughts - like I indicate above, I do sorta love this track and it's a total earworm. Nice work!
Ohhh... Love love this. From the gritty production, to the vocal and backing vocal effects, surfy leads, to the video, to the overall track and all its parts.. Really groovy and infectious vibe. I don't have anything about this i don't like and while i am sure you might want more feedback the only feedback I have is "Totally love it". EH
Another good one. The lyrics are very Daniel Ash/Love and Rockets, which is cool, Love the video, too. Any updates on how things have been going doing the pandemic? Is the career gaining traction? Send a high-quality MP3 to me and I'll see what I can do about this. Same address: email@example.com
Love the visuals and inside look at you at work playing guitar and piano. Really brings the track to life. And really like the discordant harmonies on this as well, but not sure where to place this on playlists because of its unusual discordant nature at the same time. Your artist name is a bit out of the ordinary and gave me a way different impression of what I was expecting to hear, so that is a bit distracting to start. Your 'Description' below is one of the most well thought out and comprehensive I've seen, great job with similar artist statements and the like. I'm going to pass on this, but regretfully. I really like it, and will listen privately to it for a bit here and see if I can figure out where to place it further, or if your video can be used somehow in showing artists what it means to compose and record a song, so much to love just in that. Thanks for your submission, good luck with your music!
This song was perfectly fine, but, and I'm sorry to say, I didn't hear anything that really stood out or that I could be really excited about. I think you need to find your voice and lean into it, as well as perhaps investing in higher quality recording. But keep going!
Hey Brutus .. thanks for the submission. Nice song and video here. I know where your chorus was starting - but I still felt 1 min and 30 seconds into the song that I was still waiting for a big central moment for the song to take off. But all good - definitely a good tune. I would also suggest that in the 2nd verse you do something to ramp up the production. You're in what I would call your "2nd Act" and personally I could hear some more production elements going on ... or what I would call a 2nd melody or a riff. More on that here. https://www.benjamingroff.com/blog/2nd-melodies-aka-the-riff Love the idea of "a stuntman holding on to your heart." Really cool. Just not sure if the entire piece puts me over the top but definitely strong. p.s. have you tried putting this into a more uptempo type of thing?
Wow, lovely sound right off the bat. Definitely hearing the Elliot Smith vibe, though not so much it takes away from the originality of the sound. No real critical feedback, this is a lovely tune and I'll happily share it on my twitter. Hope your music finds its people! PS: rad video!
The juxtaposition of the laid back vocals and the interesting keyboard melody really grabbed my attention. This track could go in multiple directions. Very listenable. The video adds a nice layer letting the fans behind the recording scenes.
Interesting song Brutus. It's been a while. Glad to see you're still writing thought-provoking and emotional songs. Nice build up in this one. Has a 90s alternative rock vibe to it, which is really appealing. Well done on your mix and mastering. The video could do a little more to communicate the story that your song is trying to illustrate. Cut clips of your recording this doesn't do much for the emotional depth that the song has.
The opening has a Beatles vibe! I like to keep the pop filter at least six inches from the mic. 😜 What a great idea to just film yourself recording and create a video out of it. You've done a great job assembling the footage into something interesting, that helps draw attention to the song. If I'm being nitpicky, the vocal pitch on some of those long notes is questionable. I wish the drums entered sooner, and I guess what was the chorus didn't really feel like a chorus. Love the lyrics though. That central image is fantastic. I know the feeling! Genre-wise, this isn't a great fit for my #synthfam following, but if I pitch the utility angle of the video, that might get a few views.
Right from the jump - LOVE this video. Candidly, I don't really care about music videos 99/100 times but this works to propel the tune. The whole "don't bore us, get to the chorus" is sorta addressed by the visuals. I was in right away. Definite Elliott Smith vibes, which are a little tough for sync in general. I think that the production & overall style here is strong enough that it shouldn't hold you up too much - just need to get the tunes out there. I don't have any negative notes on the music dude - I really like the song and on a technical level it's really tight and plays nicely! I'd say to look at current trends in film & tv music (check out Tunefind, read all the blogs and articles you can find, see what music supervisors work on what shows and cross-reference against what artists they typically license... etc) and then PUSH PUSH PUSH. Also - this title isn't registered on BMI. That could be lag if you registered it on SOCAN (they work together and sometimes there's a delay) but you need to be VERY EASY TO FIND - when we need to use a song, we can't go hunting for you for too long. I'd call your SOCAN rep and see if they can help you get your contact info up on BMI. Also, obviously, you gotta build up social. That isn't really my wheelhouse, but that's how things are moving more and more. I'll listen to more of your tunes - subscribing up to your youtube channel now.
Hi and thanks for sending. Cool track. Love the video as well. Nice job on that. The track has a really lush anthemic feel to it. Kind of reminds me of like you mention in your bio, Beck, but also even artist like David Bowie, and groups like ELO come to mind. Sort of cool, psychedelic, but sonically pleasing as well. Technically, and i know this isn't a traditional song so the structure doesn't necessarily need to adhere, but for me and this is subjective it would have been nice to hear a little more deviation across the 4 minutes. You sort of vamp on the main progression which is fine, but it would have been cool to have it travel somewhere else or bring in higher highs or lower lows in terms of the arrangement (ie maybe dropping to just vocal at some point, or bringing in strings and bigger drums to really up the feel towards the end). Just a little more dynamics to the overall structure for me would have been pleasing and more emotionally captivating . Again, I am a firm believer in music being art and totally respect what you put down here, but if i had to point something out that struck me it would be that. Overall, great work. Dig the vibe, the vocal, the sentiment, and the visual. Nice job all around and i appreciate you sending. If you are potentially interested in sync let me know and we can connect on that front. Best, EH
Outstanding! Love it! Send me a high-quality MP3 and lemme see what I can do about getting a feature on The Edge. Send it to firstname.lastname@example.org And is there an official release date for this or an album?
I dig this tune! if there was an option between 'like it' and 'love it' - i'd have chosen that. Personally, I enjoy it and think it's very listenable. From a commercial/professional point of view - I think you're doing much more right than wrong, however - there are a few areas of improvement I notice consider the 1.15 mark - it doesn't hit quite hard enough maybe a bigger/harder build? bridge comes in at around 2.15 - i think this is the strongest part of the song... and it takes you a little too long to get into it I like the overall vibe & instrumentation. production is slick! I think it gets a bit repetitive on the outro. also, I think you have a great voice and really wouldn't change the vocal performance. the overall word here in terms of my feedback i guess would be 'tightening'
Like the dreamy quality of the instrumental and vocal. Airy and engaging. The singing is a little off kilter which works. Very indie quality to it that works. I would have liked to hear a little deviation from the track in general like a bridge or breakdown. Maybe even a full break from the instrumental and just acapella section. Also like the interplay of the two vocals and the section where you get more aggressive in the vocal timbre. Overall a nice track. I'd love to hear more.
I like the song it is just the right amount on melancholy. I also enjoyed the lyric video. I thought that some of the words were not readable because of the style chosen but overall I really like it.
Another nice one from you. I like the style of the lyric video, too. I haven't seen anything presented quite like this before. No notes from me on songwriting, performance, arrangement, or production. This one stands well on its own. And I generally don't say this, but I like the ending: a nice, quick cut. This could work at radio in a variety of formats: alternative, AAA, and maybe even pop (pop is all about ballads these days). I'd start at alternative simply because it fits in with a lot of what the format is playing these days. I also can also see this one being good for a sync opportunity for TV or film. Time to hit up the music supervisors!
I really like this music video and the song is very catchy. The song is very well produced and it is great musically speaking. I thought that the lyric video was very creative. It is great all around. I would love to play it on my station.
Another great track. This certainly works with what's going on with alt-pop these days. Again, no notes from me on songwriting, performance or performance. I'd love to hear what a big-name producer might do with the final mix. There's an opportunity make it sound bigger and more cinematic, especially in the chorus. (I have no idea how to technically do that; it's way above my pay grade.) Have you got management? An agent? How about a radio plugger? If not, it's time to look around. I'll pass this through my social media networks. Let's see what kind of traffic you see. Good work! Keep it up.
Very cool song, I don't have any critiques as far as the production goes, sound great! Lovely video too :). I'll happily share this. I'm away at the moment but when I return in September I'll post to my twitter community
Another impressive song and video. Your music and songwriting keeps getting better and better. I really love this one! Send it to me. You have my email address right? Easiest is email@example.com. Let's talk soon!
The video was cool, and I think it was well done for what I'm assuming was a small budget (typically the case with smaller acts). I wasn't as excited about the song, but it was still fine. Not really my thing, but I bet some people would be into it. I can't say if it actually even needed anything, or if it just wasn't for me.
This is outstanding! I love everything about it. I'll share this online with my networks. And if you send a high-quality MP3 to firstname.lastname@example.org, I'll see if I can find a spot on my radio show.
Flickering keys and a soothing synth-bass comprise the initial moments, projecting a captivating and nocturnal type of soundscape. Vocals initially show a sort of cool nonchalance initially, picking up a hitch to a gliding sort of passion as the track progresses. Key-laden interlude around 01:10 does well in adding some variation to the mix early on, so the listener maintains focus. The keys prance around nicely at 01:45, comprising a moment that repeats nicely until conclusion, as the calming organ permeates to close it out. This is a pleasant track fit for night driving. I look forward to supporting on OS. Also, since you marked needing help with promotion, feel free to send me an email at email@example.com to inquire about my PR servicing's rates and success stories. Would love to work with you. Thanks for the submission! -Mike
I really love this track! It's incredibly catchy, and the dancers in the video keep it engaging enough to watch. I'm not super into the font/colors of the lyrics, but I do appreciate the contrast to the black and white video. Like I said though, the track itself is super catchy and I'd love to work with it!
This song is immediately catchy and engaging, lovely! Like science-fiction Beatles having a psychedelic experience. I don't have any feedback from a production perspective, it sounds lovely and well-balanced throughout to my ears. Wish I could record my own music this well! Could definitely imagine this as a soundtrack to some cool scene in an indie film, a road trip or something like that. Not really into the video, but that might just be because it's not my style, or I don't get it. One man's pleasure is another's pain, right 😉 Happy to share the song on my twitter, hope it helps! Best of luck to you! Nate
Great sound! I really like this track. Solid vocals and a strong backing track (plus a cool video). Definitely a cut above some of the other stuff that is submitted for review. Let me know when it is up on Spotify and I'm happy to include in future playlists. Thanks for sharing!!
We're definitely dealing with something beyond the norm here, a Beatles influenced act for sure but one that might sit easily at the table occupied by Django Django too. It is laidback stuff but has an air of memorability throughout and that is not just in the falsetto crescendos but in the pops and squeaks that emerge in the arrangements that could easily have come across as fractured but are completely vital for the success of the piece. Occupying that halfway house between dance and pop this is something I could see myself bopping along to at the weekend and that is a rarity let me tell you. A thoroughly fine few minutes.
This is pretty. Nice work. I haven't anything to offer when it comes to songwriting, performance or production. It's certainly in line with what's happening in indie and alt-rock today. Have you sent me stuff before? The name seems family. (Forgive me, but I get so many submissions!) Time for some questions: 1. What are your career goals? Radio play? Recording? Licensing and synchs? Income from a publishing deal? All these paths need to be investigated. 2. Your social media strategy will be key. Make sure that you reply to every comment that may come in. Turn early fans into evangelists, especially the ones who contributed to this video. Get them to spread the word. 3. If you don't already, get someone to handle getting your material on streaming music services, especially someone who knows how to get your songs on the best and music influential new music/new discovery playlists. They're becoming increasingly important. 4. If radio airplay is important to you, get a radio plugger. They know how to get to the right music directors. Work with both campus stations, public radio and commercial alternative/AAA radio. 5. Make friends with as many bloggers as possible. Even the smallest want to think that they can discover The Next Big Thing. Every little bit of coverage helps. 6. Play live as much as possible. Nothing is better than having a group of strangers giving you real feedback in real time. But I have a feeling you knew that, right? 7. Great job getting something on YouTube. Even a lyric video li,e this works. You need to be on every platform where people might discover you. I'll post this on my social networks. That's good for at least 100,000 people.
I really like these lyrics! I'm guessing that like me, you care more about how the words make you feel, than what they mean. The first two lines kinda give it away, since smoke doesn't have a mouth and all... 😅 Really cool video too. It's got a slick retro vibe with the aerobics and synth bass, but it's not just cheesy nostalgia. Vocals are distinctively lovely as well, particularly in the chorus. They just want to float away into the ether (like smoke? 😩) Anyway, I really like everything about this and am happy to share it with my following on Twitter. Thanks for sharing it with me! Next time it would help if you could include a short, catchy description of the song or act that's easy to copy/paste for social media sharing. That way we don't have to strain our brain coming up with something clever, and you get to choose how you're presented to the world.
This is nice. I get an MGMT vibe from it. I'd also be interested in hearing out an outside producer might contribute to the arrangement, maybe as a way to fill out the mix to maybe make it...I don't know, a little more lush? Other than that, I don't have anything to offer on the structure, songwriting, performance or production. This just needs some outside ears to punch it up a tiny bit. Still, this more than enough to pique interest in your work. I'll give it some attention through my social channels. That's good for about 100,000 people.
Hello, I'd switch out the snare sound and use less compression - it's all one tight waveform, I prefer a more spread sound with each instrument in its own pocket. Voice and BVs sounds good. Keys too compressed for my tastes, I'd want more variation of waveform and a wider spread. Piano sound is nice - perhaps lower level. There's a sound like a distorted guitar in there, could be higher in the mix to compensate. Hope this helps! Mee
Really nice stuff. Grabs you from the first second really. Definitely a good one for sync, be sure to send it my way when it's finished up. Do you control all your own rights? Many thanks, Marcus
Such a psychedelic opening and when the vocals arrive they just add to the sweet easy feeling that today is for you and me and nobody else is going to change that. It is a boon for those into their vintage sounds and the harmonies don't do anything to jettison from 'Hunger Stays' 60's base. So short and sweet and by the mid-section I was convinced that we were listening to lost classic, it has worked its magic and I was lost in its multi-coloured vapour trail. An album of the stuff could be quite the treat.
Like your description of "an electronic new wave version of Steve Miller". I'd like to find a place for this on playlists and shows, please send a high quality mp3 to me at firstname.lastname@example.org with 'FLUENCE REQUEST - ARTIST NAME - TRACK TITLE' in the subject of the email. Its still a bit bass heavy sounding, so may not play well, I'd recommend looking at further mixing/mastering. But well done in so many ways. Thanks for your submission!
This is terrific! Love the keyboard sound. Retro yet...not. I found myself humming along about 1:20 into the song. Great production, top-notch performance. No critiques from me. So now what? Are you signed? Do you have a radio plugger? What's your social media strategy? Are you making friends with bloggers? Are you on Spotify/Apple Music/all the other streaming services? Do you have a plan for turning early fans into evangelists? I'll give you some love through my social media circles. That'll be good for about 100,000 people. Nice job. Keep it up.
Excellent and powerful video and track, so very well done. A little bass heavy on our Bose headphones so that we can't turn it up as much as we'd like. It's got dark undertones that aren't quite a fit for what we're looking for at the moment, but its compelling in more ways than one. Tells the story really well. Love the ending! Suggest you put your social media and streaming links in your Soundcloud description so fans can find out more about you if they want to, and also spend some time on social media with it, maybe posting snippets of it with tags to get more attention for it. Wish we could do more to be helpful, thanks for your submission, good luck with your music!
The pulsing percussion and synth wables reminds me - in terms of atmosphere - of Swedish group The Knife, though the vocals pack an anthemic presence more in the vein of Depeche Mode. It makes for an interesting rock/electronic sound, complemented well by the ghostly synth pads during the hook first introduced around the one-minute mark. Cool serene synth arps around the 01:30 mark as well. It shows enough diversity, tonally and structurally, to hook me throughout and keep things interesting. The track is a nice hybrid of Depeche Mode-like synth moodiness and Muse-like anthemic appeal. Good stuff -- I'll look to posting on Obscure Sound in the near future. Also feel free to reach out to me at email@example.com if interested in rates/success stories regarding my PR services. Thanks for the submission! -Mike
This is a fun track with a cool video. Both video and song are nicely produced, edgy and grab your attention. Definitely can hear the Bowie influence. Nice job and I'm happy to share with my followers and on my year-end playlist.
Another stellar track. Brutus Begins never disappoints. Like a story-driven filmmaker, each new release keeps impressing me more. Add to that the intellectually provocative themes of the video, and the intrigue has reached new heights. Terrific work!
This is pretty cool. I love the visuals--very creative and professional looking. The song itself is well-produced (I listened to it with and without the video). Given how well bands like Phantogram are doing right now, this fits in very well. I also hear elements of Pink Floyd in the mix. Never a bad thing... The only criticism I have is I wish the song had a more definitive ending. As it stands, it just kind of...stops. Time to get promoting it. Do you have a radio plugger working on your behalf? You need someone to push this to music directors and speciality shows on both commercial and campus radio stations. And think about submitting it to music supervisors for use in TV and movies. I'll give this some Facebook and Twitter love. That's good for about 100,000 impressions.
Wow, this promises to be dark! The groove reminds me of Goldfrapp, and the guitar of Flock of Seagulls "I Ran" That blood red forest looks amazing. In a haunting sort of way! Stellar production and performance, a very catchy song, and an eye-catching video. I think you've got a winner here! I'm not quite sure how to introduce it, but I'm happy to share it with my following on Twitter! Thanks for sharing it with me. A couple suggestions for future Fluence submissions: 1. Include the lyrics so we can follow along (I understood them just fine, but wasn't always focused on them) 2. Include a short, catchy description of the song or act that's easy to copy/paste for social media sharing. That way we don't have to strain our brain coming up with something clever, and you get to choose how you're presented to the world.
It's not bad but I don't think anyone is waiting for a very 80s song - that needed to happen 40 years ago. I think you need to add some 'pop' to the song, give it something more contemporary, take it out of that brooding atmospherical sound. M83 is a good example of that, he's great at building soundscapes that have a pop tendency to them without losing the overall epic feeling. Right now, in this state, it disappears in the background pretty quickly. There's no real recognizable chorus, there's no real 'wow' moment either. The basic production beat also runs through the entire song which makes the song very repetitive overall.
I knew I'd love this just from the opening bass notes. The vocal is so cool and distinctive, especially against the stark backdrop. I love how they tuck into the mix instead of sitting on top of it. The harmonies are particularly tasty! It looks like you're not on SoundCloud! You should fix that. I'd totally repost the song. I strongly believe every artist should at least be on Facebook, Twitter, SoundCloud, YouTube, and Instagram with at least a token presence. The last minute of the song drags a bit. I expected something else to come, until I saw how little time was left. But hey, I can live with that! Now I know what to expect. I'll definitely share this with my following on Twitter! Thanks for sharing it with me. A suggestion for future Fluence submissions: Include a short, catchy description of the song or act that's easy to copy/paste for social media sharing. That way we don't have to strain our brain coming up with something clever, and you get to choose how you're presented to the world.
Lovely EDM/Rock tune in the style of Purity Ring and The History Of Panic. Not too fast paced or over-tempo based, like many emerging artists do in this style. Nice production on mixing synth and guitars with drums in a balanced way. This track works well with a variety of styles, giving you some excellent radio options. Message me for more on that. This song would be a great fit for The Appetizer Radio Show. I hope there's a full album with this one and I look forward to hearing it.
Based on how the song began, it turned into something unexpected. The major key of the vocals was something of a surprise--not that this is a bad thing, of course. The nature of the opening keyboard pulse led me to believe that something else was coming. Interesting idea, mating elements of semi-industrial with what could be described as an indie-rock vocal. Sounds fresh. That being said, I'd be interested what a hot producer might suggest for the arrangement. More bottom end? A bigger/more complex drum sound? A few more layered keyboards? Hard to say, but I can't help thinking that the song needs something more in its production when compared to hits by Banners, Big Data/Joywave and others. Time to start seeding this to various blogs to see what other kinds of opinions you might get. And if you have the funds, it might be an idea to create a lyric video for YouTube.
Brutus Begins return with the smoldering "Love & War," a four-minute electro-pop epic if ever there was one. Driven by little more than stabbing synths and propulsive beats, and rounded out by some reverb-heavy electric guitar in the chorus, the band create an entire sonic universe out of such disparate elements. Things gets more dynamic in the second verse, introducing a variety of new synth sounds while staying true to the core melody. Vocally, this song is delivered with an impassioned lead vocal that compels the listener to keep listening until the song's conclusion, at which point the guitar part has overwhelmed the synth section as the primary melodic driving force.
Found myself turning it up from the first beat, instantly nodding my head to it. Wish I could hear the lyrics better, but that's just my personal taste, I love lyrics. The vocals do fit very well within the greater framework of the song, and sound like another instrument, adding melodic and rhythmic structure. Overall I don't have any suggestions, I think it's a well produced song and an enjoyable listening experience. Bear in mind that this is not a genre I'm particularly knowledgeable about, so this is really just my feeling about it :). Happy to give it a share, thanks and I wish you the best with it! Warmly Nate
Goldfrapp meets Nitzer Ebb - love it! It's hard to make out the lyrics, and they are good lyrics, but I actually still kinda like them buried. It makes the beat feel more powerful. The quiet break before the chorus is unconventional and awesome. And after. Typically you'd want to keep things moving but again, I appreciate it even if it's "wrong." A couple suggestions for future Fluence submissions: 1. Include the lyrics so we can follow along (I found them on SoundCloud!). 2. Include a short, catchy description of the song or act that's easy to copy/paste for social media sharing. That way we don't have to strain our brain coming up with something clever, and you get to choose how you're presented to the world Anyway, great stuff. I know my followers will love it too! I already reposted on SoundCloud, and I'll tweet it out this week.
Love the build-up. Very much in line with what's happening in some areas of alt-rock today. Good production in almost a Pink Floyd-ish way (especially with the chord changes). It's so Floyd-ish that I was expecting a bigger increase in tension and intensity around the 2:30 mark that would carry through the rest of the song. That, however, is me wearing my producer's hat. If I'd been in charge of the session, that's what I would have suggested: a greater emotional build-up and release. The ending does need work. The song just sort of...ends. There's no strong conclusion to what's otherwise a very promising song. Again, this is the domain of an outside producer, someone who can listen with a fresh set of ears. Good job, though, and I will post it on my website. What's your next step? A re-recording? A remix? A radio plugger?
First of all, I really like the production. Good mastering for the intro. It rumbled my office speakers. I like that. I honestly can't imagine why this couldn't be some kind of current alt-rock hit--at least from an aesthetic or sonic point of view. The challenge now is to get enough people to hear it so that it reaches critical mass. Who are you pitching it to? Do you have a radio plugger? Have you made friends with DJs at influential alt-rock and campus stations? What's your social media strategy? What else is in the pipeline? If you can send me an embeddable/email-able link, I can maybe forward it to some people who might be interested.
On "Never Fade" by Brutus Begins, the band lays down five minutes of brooding, introspective indie rock that borrows heavily from bands like Death Can For Cutie, while at the same time carving out a sound that is all their own. Some heavy synth bass in the second verse and serene split male/female vocal harmonizing elevate the song to an entirely new level, and as the synth lead into the third verse is inspired to say the least. There's nothing overly complex going on here musically, yet "Never Fade" is deceptively dense in its layers of musical intricacy. And therein lies the genius of Brutus Begins: they aren't trying to come across as virtuoso players, and yet the sum total of the entire musical arrangement is exactly that. Clever synth hooks abound, burrowing their way deep inside the listener's head for a permanent hibernation that will no doubt outlast the Winter of 2016!
Great alternative pop rock vibe, well done. Love your reference to Tame Impala in your 'Description', they are a favorite. Send a high quality mp3 to me at firstname.lastname@example.org and I'll give it a play on shows and playlists. Could be a little long for radio,so might want to create a shorter 'radio mix'. Also keep working on the music/instrumentation/mix to deepen it even more. Great sound, love the harmonies toward the end. Thanks for your submission, good luck with your music!
Do you guys like Death Cab For Cutie? Because this song reminds me a lot of them, but with less synths and more guitars instead. Let's say early DCFC. It has that same "college vibe", interesting lyrics and I have to say it's very well produced. It has everything for being blogged and then listened around the world. So my advice is to invest in a good PR service if you can or arm yourself with patience, dig into HypeMachine all the blogs you think will like your sound and write to them a direct email, with basic infos and a Soundcloud link. Your music is good, it just needs a push. I'm sharing this through our social pages, thank you for the submission and good luck for your future.
Brutus Begins don’t appear to care how other bands sound or what this hour’s zeitgest is because they are led from their own internal machinations. Now that is refreshing, despite a production that might be a little away from pristine, and something to be cherished in an increasingly homogeneous music world. ‘Never Fade’ is calm, cool and collected and chooses the right moments to burst forth with incandescent melody and ever so lovely chorus. That it sustains itself for almost 5 minutes just illustrates the confidence this band possess. Pretty exciting all told, a band with oodles of potential that will likely unveil a canon of winning numbers before too long.
I like it! It reminds me of a low-key Silversun Pickups (a good thing, trust me) with touches of Death Cab and Tame Impala. My only concern is with the length. Is there a way to shave 30-45 seconds off? Knowing radio programmers as I do (I am one!), song length can be an important determining factor on whether a song makes it through a music meeting. Providing a radio edit option a well as this full-length version is common practice. The other thing I'd seriously consider is hiring a radio plugger to get your song started on speciality/new release shows that many alt-rock stations run in the evening and weekends. I can recommend a few if you'd like. The other thing you should consider is a publicist who can bombard bloggers and music writers/reviewers with press releases. All you need is a few nibbles to get tration.