I really dig this track! It's slow, mellow, but deep and resonant. I like it's minimal nature and was disappointed to hear it end. The ending seemed almost too premature. It felt like another chapter was unfolding at the end, and I was ready to keep going. Nice work.
Really dope style. I feel like the vocals are pretty on this deep track and maybe the percussion should match that. You've clearly got a gift for melody though. I wouldn't change a thing there. Maybe try and make the percussion a little deeper and more complex. Fatten up the bass a bit. Otherwise, this is a great track. You could probably even fill it out with another verse.
This is great! I love the vocals and the beat. Its emotional, raw and intimate. I think an occasional dub delay on the snare would be cool. My only complaint is its too short of a song. Great work.