I like the build and the melody leading up to the drop. Very progressive house/trance. I think the drop needs to be bigger and fuller. Layer a bunch of synths in there. Some female vocals singing about freedom with lots of verb would really be nice. The drops and builds need to be more dramatic. Make the drops unpredictable - go an extra bar or drop the 1. The track here is solid it just needs some beefed up/more dramatic production to give it that really big room sound.