Great production. It has a very crisp sound and fits well with anything on a mainstream level. That said, many of the track's ideas and themes have been explored in countless rap songs already. If the entire album is going to stand out as something different, then it needs to be 'different' rather than recycled verses of 'I'm going to do this' and 'I'm better than these guys'.
Really nice loop and beat. The first verse is really nice too. The vocals in the chorus are where the track loses energy. When the second verse comes in it need to do something new and step up the game. The loop needs to change a little for the chorus.
I'm not really a fan of this kind of this kind of music, but I liked it because you use some cool instrumentation in the song. I like to hear guitars, pianos, and rock sounds in hip hop songs. But this style and genre is typically not a good fit for me.