I'm a sucker for this kind of psych-pop. A couple of thoughts: 1. The first 14 seconds seem out of step with the rest of the song. If I were a music director, I'd cut that and loop the rest of the intro for another 8 bars. Better to get into the groove and vibe right away, you know? 2. The same applies for the first part of the instrumental bridge. I know what you're going for, but it seems a little too different from everything else. Maybe a different arrangement? Change the solo? 3.A personal preference: I was expecting some increased tension towards the end with a bigger crescendo and then denouement. Instead the song lapsed back into the figure that I found out of place.
Great pacing in the intro - I like that I can't predict exactly what kind of melody I'm about to hear. I get a 60's vibe... until I hear the first verse. Great unpredictability! I would turn up the treble in your sound - I want to hear those awesome vocals more because I think the melody really works. The hazy guitar is creating an ambiance that I think you may want to tone down slightly. Overall, very cool vibe and unique sound. Everything is rather polished, and I love the summer feel I get here! Great work - I'm happy to post this on my blog (look out for it within the next week!).