I love this track. Great vocals. Excellent synth work. Let's do a release on Discosapien Records! If you are interested in putting this record out go ahead and email us at email@example.com. Thanks!
Hey guys, thanks for sending this in. I actually do like the record, I would say my main comment would however be that it does sound slightly dated... There are definitely areas of Europe that would love this so maybe contact some european PR companies/publishers and get some feedback - France/Germany especially - If you're aiming for UK then I don't think it's a case of there being anything wrong with the instrumentations just the sounds are a little dated - for me anyway. Hope this helps in some way!!
Hi all, I really enjoyed this. MY suggestions would be to try and hit the sync / advert market as I could definitely hear this being on tv! As far as radio's concerned I love the direction but I don't think it's 'quite' catchy enough to challenge your competitors in this market - for example you'd be going head to head against Charli XCX. Please do keep me up to date on what you're up to, would love to come see you live.
This is not a bad song, but there's lots of work to be done. I think the song in itself (voice, lyrics, melody, etc.) is quite nice and has potential, but the production is the key flaw - that needs major work. It sounds too much like a demo, like something recorded in a bedroom over which a vocalist sang a track. It sounds like goth synth pop - a goth sound doesn't really work anymore in 2015 (unless you're aiming for a very specific audience, which this track doesn't because the other elements don't speak that same vibe) and synth pop is in general a lot more slick, more catchy and easily accessible. I'd scratch the entire production and take the song acoustically and work your way up from there again, literally re-thinking every aspect of the production aiming for something more slick. You can continue in this direction but it would still need more emphasizing on certain aspects of the song (chorus needs to stand out, less demo'ish sound, bolder sound overall). I suggest to keep the music for you right now and not share it with any labels/PR's/fans because this song the way it is right now isn't ready to be shared with the rest of the world, in my personal opinion. Work hard & come back once you've got a sound that really clicks.