- Songwriter | Designer | Human
Love the quiet opening and building. Love the vocal. Around the 1 minute mark the uniqueness seems to fall into a fairly standard sequence. I like the fuzz of the guitar but it gets a bit too poppy for my liking in brief spurts. Guitar solo around 2:20 needs a punch. Overall I like this but it feels like it is missing something. It seems like a mix of alt and pop but doesn't quite mesh sonically for me. There's a lot of great stuff in here. It may just be me but I'd rather you kept to the alt side of the sound. I think this would work as something a bit darker. The pop elements take away from the parts I love. Great work even still!