I like the slightly dreamy feel of this track and the break is a really nice change. The backbeat is like a heart beat that comes alive during the bridge. It's overall a really pretty track that makes me feel like I'm a summer lull and the bridge is like the summer love taking over.
This is a song that everyone can relate to. We have all been there at one point or another. I feel like the lyrics get lost in the song. I am glad that I had them to look at. I would remix the song and turn up the vocals a bit at the beginning. Other than that it is a good song and I like it.
Cool vibe and sound. Around 2:00 the shift in rhythm creates a different kind of experience. Dig it. Do you have a clean version (for airplay consideration)? Would love to hear the other tunes you have. Shoot an email to firstname.lastname@example.org and let's talk.
I like the arrangement very interesting and different. I thought the vocal could be louder in the mix. I'll give it ╭∩╭∩╭∩╭∩ (︶︿︶)∩╮∩╮∩╮∩╮8THUMBS UP. Would def like to hear more and think you should invest in a quality studio mix or higher quality of Soundcloud. Great job all together. OOhhhhhhh yes keep working on it and bring the vocals out front.
Nice way to use an emo sound to raise awareness for mental health. There's a little Trent Reznor intertwined with Radiohead in the style. I'm drawn to music that hits me with the lyrical content more than just the music. You've achieved that here. Good work.