That intro is hokey but fun. The volume levels are a bit off between the piano, SFX, and the track that follows.
You've got a great voice! The song is effective, straight-up pop. The production feels a bit generic and soundtrack-ish / Disney. Not necessarily a bad thing for sync placements!
I'm not getting a strong sense of identity but at the same time, the presentation and product potentially appeal to a wide demographic. But tween girls are probably the bullseye.
This isn't really a fit at all for my old, Depeche Mode loving audience, so I'm not going to share it - but I appreciate your sharing it with me, and wish you the best in getting it out to the world!
Brian.
Brian Hazard