

Brice Kendall
Brice Kendall
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- Singer/Songwriter
- Location
- Miami
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Wrong Way by Brice Kendall

Hey Brice thanks for sending. Solid track. One thing I felt when listening is that the song felt "ongoing to me" in the form. You might want to try creating some space for the vocal? Like maybe a 4 measure turnaround after the chorus that is just instrumental. Also - food for thought. Do you really need a pre chorus? It feels like (to me) an extended sentence before getting to the chorus. It might be worth checking that out. Also, this comes up quite a lot when I'm reviewing and instead of just chord / chord / chord - can you make a 2nd melody or a riff around that? There's a whole article I did on the subject here and it might be super valuable: https://www.benjamingroff.com/blog/2nd-melodies-aka-the-riff Thanks for the submission - really good but not sure if it's quite right for the projects I'm working on.
Nate Maingard