Hey Kris - thanks for the submission. Off the top listening to the song - especially since you're in the rock lane - I would really encourage you to look into accelerating the impact and infectiousness of your songs by making riffs and 2nd melodies instead of just chord chord chord. I actually have a whole article on this here that I think will help you approach your songs like you haven't before. https://www.benjamingroff.com/blog/2nd-melodies-aka-the-riff If you think of your favorite songs - rock songs or not - I be 99% of them will have riffs or what I call 2nd melodies. I think the video is pretty good too. Have you ever thought of maybe making a lyric video out of this with the visuals a a background. I'm not quite sure if this is quite right for me and the projects i'm working on but sounds like you're heading in the right direction. Hope it's helpful. Benjamin.
Benjamin Groff