Hey FAETELLE - wow I really like this. First what I noticed was the verse melody - so many people don't write verse melodies anymore and they're more or less just "filler." I also liked the dark gothy electronic side of this. Production was nice too and there are some nice production parts too...etc. Overall, I thought this was a really fresh piece of music. In a perfect world there would be $2,500 - $5,000 you could throw at this as far as pumping up the sounds, production, mix - but I will say it's intriguing enough for me to check out your other music. Really nice work!