Michelle Carden

Michelle Carden

Michelle Carden


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Endgame (Lyric Video) by Keenan Smits

Scott Cohen

The track is good.  The next step is to get some action around it.  In today's world that means Tik Tok.  Focus there.

Benjamin Groff

Hi Kennan thanks for the submission.  Solid song here for sure and really strong voice.  I do have one game changing (I think) piece of advice.  I think this song (and if I were to guess maybe some of your other songs) could really benefit from having a "2nd melody" going on.  What's that?  Well it's basically the "riff" of the song that's copyrightable i.e. a guitar part, riff, a synth figure, a signature bassline - a combination of that.  So instead of having "hook melody + chords" you have "hook melody + hook melody" - essentially keep the harmonic structure - but instead of chords - have a 2nd melody structure that outlines the chords.  I wrote a whole article on it here - all the hits (for the most part) has this going for them.  Hope it's helpful!   https://www.benjamingroff.com/blog/2nd-melodies-aka-the-riff 

Michelle Carden submitted media.

sofa surfer by Cole Allen

Benjamin Groff

Hey Cole - great title / concept for Sofa Surfer and that whole lyric journey about mothers belly etc.  In short, I really like "Sofa Surfer" - just dropped in our weekly chart / playlist here on Spotify that has about 5,000 followers: https://open.spotify.com/playlist/10S981NoNhgn9tdUq9jNFE?si=6Rj4GHZVTU-xiSvq5rQ26g  Nice work on this and will check out some more tunes!  


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