Hi Kennan thanks for the submission. Solid song here for sure and really strong voice. I do have one game changing (I think) piece of advice. I think this song (and if I were to guess maybe some of your other songs) could really benefit from having a "2nd melody" going on. What's that? Well it's basically the "riff" of the song that's copyrightable i.e. a guitar part, riff, a synth figure, a signature bassline - a combination of that. So instead of having "hook melody + chords" you have "hook melody + hook melody" - essentially keep the harmonic structure - but instead of chords - have a 2nd melody structure that outlines the chords. I wrote a whole article on it here - all the hits (for the most part) has this going for them. Hope it's helpful! https://www.benjamingroff.com/blog/2nd-melodies-aka-the-riff
Hey Cole - great title / concept for Sofa Surfer and that whole lyric journey about mothers belly etc. In short, I really like "Sofa Surfer" - just dropped in our weekly chart / playlist here on Spotify that has about 5,000 followers: https://open.spotify.com/playlist/10S981NoNhgn9tdUq9jNFE?si=6Rj4GHZVTU-xiSvq5rQ26g Nice work on this and will check out some more tunes!